Don't you mean "Tacoma has careless armed pizza delivery drivers." or maybe "Tacoma pizza delivery drivers: Armed and Careless."I read your proposed headline as saying Tacoma armed pizza delivery guys in a careless manner, which would make this accident Tacoma's fault.
This is merely a precaution.
Don't you mean "Tacoma has careless armed pizza delivery drivers." or maybe "Tacoma pizza delivery drivers: Armed and Careless."
ReplyDeleteI read your proposed headline as saying Tacoma armed pizza delivery guys in a careless manner, which would make this accident Tacoma's fault.